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Totality
May 25th, 2011, 05:51 PM
Hey,

Here is my new poem - kinda Repetitive, but I enjoyed writing it so I hope it's an enjoyable read.

I’m sorry


I’m sorry,
For everything I did;
Everything I may have done;
Everything I might have said;
Sorry for that night;

I’m sorry,
For everything you did;
Everything you may have done;
Everything you might have said;
Are you sorry for that night?

I’m sorry,
For everything he did;
Everything he may have done;
Everything he might have said;
Is he sorry for that night?

I’m sorry,
For everything she did;
Everything she may have done;
Everything she might have said;
Is she sorry for that night?

I’m sorry,
For everything they did;
Everything they may have done;
Everything they might have said;
Are they sorry for that night?

I’m sorry,
For everything we did;
Everything we may have done;
Everything we might have said;
Are we sorry for that night?

I‘m sorry,
For everything I did;
Everything I may have done;
Everything I might have said;
You know what?
I’m not sorry for that night.

BrokenXPaperXDolls
May 26th, 2011, 06:00 AM
Nice:D

CryWolf
June 2nd, 2011, 12:48 PM
You know I really like this. It covers a lot of ground in what people do and say to each other, but in the last verse it sets apart something as special without saying what it is. I like it a lot. :)

Totality
June 6th, 2011, 01:46 PM
Thanks for the feedback ^.^

TheMatrix
June 11th, 2011, 01:31 AM
at first its kinda repetitive, but then it totally surprised me at the end.
nice ;)

MissyLou
June 19th, 2011, 11:28 AM
that good cuz