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Spook
May 23rd, 2011, 10:26 AM
Ever layed down at the bottom of a pool
And seen the glassy surface above
Like it was a barrier blocking you from the world
And you were...trapped.



Glass seperates me from the domain of the land-walkers
I am just a lonely
Nothing
In a sea so filled with feeling
The sea is my mind
Am I dead?
Am I alive?
The second I lost touch with reality
Is the second I had died.

Does it make a difference
Whether I think thoughts like you
Or whether I am a being of still gravity
Just floating in the sky?

I press my hands against the cool glass
I know with just the effort I could rise
But do I really want
To be back
To be real
Again?

Warm hands grasp me
My lungs ache from the lack
Of what keeps me surviving
Maybe it's a knack

I long to embrace the serenity
The peace and calm and light
But your urgent tugs will bring-me-back

D
o
w
n

To where I came from

It wasn't your choice
To bring me back to the cold
The temporary home
Polluted with the blood and tears
Of suffering souls
Unreleased
In the small pull
Of the gravity

BrokenXPaperXDolls
May 23rd, 2011, 10:42 AM
Wow i found that very emotional and i realy loved it. amazing job:D

Spook
May 23rd, 2011, 10:47 AM
Why thank you. In the words d o w n, I tried to portray a sense of visual poetry which I recently got the idea from the book.

RoseyCadaver
May 23rd, 2011, 12:59 PM
Very deep and has thought into it :).I really loved it.

AladdinSane
May 26th, 2011, 04:41 PM
That's extremely well written! I hope to read more of these!?