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bleedoutlove
May 20th, 2011, 04:34 PM
Just a smile from you
Can cure my inner pain.
But when I saw you so sad; so scared
It killed me inside, and I couldn't ask more: I couldn't dare.

You say you bottle up your emotions
I wish we could open up to eachother.
You said you like to keep it all in; but I can see deeper
I want to understand your thoughts, but the more I try you become my heart's more secure keeper

I need you, more than you can imagine
But how would you know?
Seeing you sleep in peace next to me
Was the best thing I could ask for; those nights were the best of my life.

bleedoutlove
May 21st, 2011, 05:39 AM
^I did this when I was half asleep so it's not too good but oh well -__-

ackmedsgirl666
May 21st, 2011, 08:46 AM
very emotional and attention grabbing and well inspiring
but i like it alot

BrokenXPaperXDolls
May 22nd, 2011, 04:39 AM
I love it :D

bleedoutlove
May 22nd, 2011, 08:53 AM
I love it :D

Thank you:)