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Spook
May 18th, 2011, 11:06 AM
Too late
I'd made up my mind
Holding on to the hope
But now it's left behind
Rusty knife
Cool syringe
Only a matter of time
I thought I was getting what I wanted
But it's too late to change my mind

Rip and rage
At the ropes that bind me
Scream and shout
But nobody will find me
Vocal cords strained
This is the end of the game
I was doing this for your sake
Not to get fame

I deserve what I got
Leave me here
Let me rage
Let me moan
Don't pick me up
Don't take me home

Home, no choice
I'm all alone
Caught in cold blood
But this time it's my own

Rage
The bitch that betrayed me
Sitting tied up
Nobody can save me

I'm all alone
I whisper
I thought the world would want to know
This one's not for you
It's for me
I'm going home

Tristin.
May 18th, 2011, 11:34 AM
hmmmm, surprisingly, i like :)

well done :)x

Spook
May 19th, 2011, 09:17 AM
Thank you. :)

It was a weird poem coming from me. xD

"Sitting in cold blood, but this time it's my own"

I love that. Idk how that was thought up. :P

starlit dreams
May 20th, 2011, 08:19 AM
wow...just....wow
thats really powerful stuff caitlyn :ohmy:

Spook
May 20th, 2011, 08:29 AM
Thanks...I think? :P

BrokenXPaperXDolls
May 20th, 2011, 09:23 AM
WOW:D i realy liked it

Spook
May 23rd, 2011, 11:49 AM
Thanks. :)

RoseyCadaver
May 23rd, 2011, 12:39 PM
That seems dark for you xD,but I love it none the less :)!

Sogeking
May 23rd, 2011, 12:49 PM
That seems dark for you xD,but I love it none the less :)!

Agreed. Interesting read though. :)

joeyjorulz
May 31st, 2011, 02:39 AM
ur talented caitlin...

Totality
May 31st, 2011, 08:32 AM
Very Powerful. Very Emotional. Excellent Writing