Break Me (warning: graphic)

[Magenta]

Punch me, hit me, break my bones,
because you'll never, ever know
that it cannot hurt nearly as much
as the self-inflicted cuts and welts.

Bite me, kick me, slap my face
because pain is the one thing I chase.
You think I'm crazy when you see my arms
riddled with marks and burns and scars.

Throw me, drop me, make me cry
because I will just survive.
I withstand much worse that I inflict
upon myself to quench the urge.

[Spook]

Very good poem...from the heart.

And you might wanna change your name (JoJo) I read your other post. ;)

[Cosmic]

As Caitlin said, very heartfelt, and that passion is portrayed well within the piece. I would advise that you consider using more adjectives and other tools such as similes and metaphors to aid the description, and engage more fully the imagination of the reader.

Well done,
-Declan

[HandheldOutlaw]

Very well done. (: I love it. Keep writing. :D

[TheSleepingInsomniac]

wow just wow your an amazing writer deep and heartfelt

[bleedoutlove]

Wow...this is really relatable, I absolutely love this...this is just fantastic, from the heart you can tell it's fantastic