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deadpie
May 12th, 2011, 02:28 PM
Your scent provokes
Where a daisy blooms in catacombs
Press your thumb on my wound
Push back absolution
Release/seize my phantom perception
Slip through my vacant skin
A ghost, I am

I'm not here anymore
I'm not here anymore
I'm not here anymore

Taste of salt and iron
My animus ascends out my chest
Staring through and into
Like petals flying away in the wind
Withered skin decomposed within
Fading: A phantom, I am now

I'm not here anymore
I'm not here anymore
I'm not he

MadManWithaBox
May 12th, 2011, 03:45 PM
I really like that. I like the ending specially.

dead
May 13th, 2011, 10:01 PM
Fuck man, do you actually work on a idea over a long period of time or do you just get it all at once?

deadpie
May 13th, 2011, 11:08 PM
Fuck man, do you actually work on a idea over a long period of time or do you just get it all at once?

I write mostly everything I do sitting on the toilet, so would it be ok if I say I pull it all out my ass?

dead
May 13th, 2011, 11:38 PM
I write mostly everything I do sitting on the toilet, so would it be ok if I say I pull it all out my ass?

More than appropriate