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Nevermore
May 5th, 2011, 10:12 AM
These are some of my drawlings, be brutal, but in a nice way. :3
Kaius
May 5th, 2011, 10:33 AM
These are good, my favorite is number 5
Spook
May 5th, 2011, 10:47 AM
I <3 numbah 5
Nevermore
May 5th, 2011, 12:26 PM
Thank you :)
NomSan
May 5th, 2011, 01:38 PM
I like them, they are nice :3
FainAgain
May 5th, 2011, 06:37 PM
I'm kinda diggin 2. It's got pizazz, as my GF would say
Kaya
May 5th, 2011, 08:24 PM
The 1st one is my favorite.
How'd you get so good at drawing?
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darkwoon
May 6th, 2011, 07:48 AM
These are some of my drawlings, be brutal, but in a nice way. :3
Brutal, he? So I'll be - I LOVE brutalizing people :D
Horses: I like those sketches, but I have the feeling that they aren't original creations, but instead copies of existing illustrations (I may be wrong, though), so I'll not go into in-depth comments for it. My main gripe is that overall, the lines are very irregular - curves and lines are "trembled" and hesitant.
Sitting guy: The pose is nice, but lines would benefit from a cleanup, as they currently look rushed. The perspective of the extended leg and foot is wrong - both look 2D-ish and not part of the overall composition.
Kissing couple: Not an easy subject to draw - not only you have TWO people, but moreover, they closely interact with each other, so that's definitely the easiest pick. My main complaint: proportions - they are totally off. The guy has a much larger head than the girl, the arms and bodies are very small, etc. When drawing complex poses, always draw 'skeletons' first. Or stick figures - whatever you want to properly set up proportions and perspective before adding details. And don't try to copy mangas too much; you can draw inspiration from it, but you'll get much better-looking results if you take real photographies as references.
Interesting work overall, but I think you'd get much better results by going slower and drawing from life.
Oh, hum, and just a small general comment: rotate your pictures before posting them (nearly every paint program out there can do that) - seeing the couple upside-down is indeed not comfortable ;).
Nevermore
May 6th, 2011, 08:26 AM
Why thank you :)
I must say Darkwoon very nice advice. :) As for the horses they were pictures and I drew them from looking at the pictures, so it wasn't like I traced. That's amazing though that you could tell. I like that idea how you said use real photo graphs a a reference. I think I might try that. Thank you. Yeah, I am a bit rushed, I'll try going slower at it, and drawling from life, thank you so much! :) Oh is there any other way I can improve? Because I'd really like to get better at this, and you seem like you know what your talking about. Oh and yeah I'll try the paint thing! Thank you. :)
darkwoon
May 7th, 2011, 04:05 AM
LOL! I'm not sure at all I know what I'm talking about! :D
Anyway, if you want to improve your drawing skills, there is no secret - draw, draw and draw. Try to draw as many different things as possible, and use real-life refs whenever you can. Comics (manga included) usually make poor learning models.
As for the horses, no amazing power involved, I fear ;). It is just that when copying a picture, most people make more direct strokes drawn slower, and it clearly shows (the lines are thicker and don't vary much in thickness or pressure).
Nevermore
May 9th, 2011, 08:47 AM
Oh, lol.
You really do seem to know what you're talking about though. Thank you for your help. :)
Grayeyes
May 12th, 2011, 11:48 AM
I like the ones with horses. :) I could never draw horses :/
HandheldOutlaw
May 17th, 2011, 06:59 PM
I love the first and the fifth. (: You're very talented.
RoseyCadaver
May 18th, 2011, 07:18 PM
They're pretty awesome !I would work on proportioning with the bodies on number four,I have a problem with that too ^_^.
starlit dreams
May 20th, 2011, 08:43 AM
youre really good. i like number 2 and 6
User Deleted
May 20th, 2011, 08:48 AM
I like 1, 3, and 5 the most. I guess that makes me indecisive, or your just that good of a drawer :P
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