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Theone15
April 29th, 2011, 10:34 AM
Hope you enjoy the homicidal side of my mind.
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I sat in the seat at the back of the class my hand reached into my bag, a almost maniacal smile formed on my face as my hand wrapped around the metal handle of a machine pistol, I laughed maniacally everyone stared at me, "stop staring at me!" I shouted pulling out the gun and fired it across the room blood splattering onto the walls and on the other students Their screams rang in my ears, I felt one thing I haven't felt in along time, joy. I saw a tall student with black hair crawling into a corner, the main bully, I stomped on his finger, I heard a bone shattering crunch, he screamed in pain, "who's the wimp now!" I shouted firing the rest of the bullets into his back.

You decide the end

Magus
April 29th, 2011, 12:02 PM
You keep shooting in the head. I mean, if I had a gun, I would have done that and more - I would do gun-kata on people.

Theone15
April 29th, 2011, 12:16 PM
The character was aiming to hurt then kill

Sage
April 29th, 2011, 01:54 PM
Regards to Evil :arrow2: The Open Book

You've not sought the permission necessary to share your work in RTE. I've taken the liberty of moving this to the creative writing board for you. If you want to discuss this with me, do so through VM or PM.