What's Life - Poem

[Totality]

Another new one - hope you enjoy!
**WARNING**


What's Life

Blood was pouring out,
He saw the knife lying there,
Next to the dead body,
She was naked and bare,

Slit 6 times,
Across each wrist,
Straight to the bone,
A great twist,

Slit across the throat,
Talk about good measure,
Raped and killed,
What a sick pleasure,

He imagined a hooded figure,
Stood with a bone scythe,
He glanced down,
Bloody Hell, What's Life?

[Donkey]

Strangely enjoyable, nice one.

[Totality]

Thanks,

I didn't know how it was gonna sound being read, but it sounded dark as I was writing it.

[Tristin.]

dark, brilliatnly dark.

your use of rythem and rhym are brilliant. and the pace is good.

tristin's review: 10/10 :D

[Totality]

Thanks ^^

I think this may be my best,

However, I do write like 5 a night haha

[Tristin.]

i used to write alot if little things, not really poems, but sort if snippets of things lol, iv got loads on file lol

[Cynical]

Simply amazing. Well written and it really gets the emotions going.

[Totality]

Thanks ^^