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Hunter Lily
April 24th, 2011, 01:10 PM
When all that is yours,
Is falling to pieces,
Don't know what to do,
Depression increases.

Look for the Northern Star,
The guiding light in your life,
Search only for them,
Do not reach for the knife.

Once you begin,
The end is hard to see,
Think not of how it is,
But how it could be.

You can end this,
As soon as it started,
You have to be strong,
Not for the fainthearted.

Keep your chin up,
For all that you're worth,
You are exceptionally amazing,
Love you must unearth.

Totality
April 24th, 2011, 02:31 PM
Really Good Writing!

Fluent and Smooth Flowing.
Great Grammar and Language.

Very Strong and Could be very Emotional

Totality
April 24th, 2011, 02:32 PM
Double Post - SORRY!

Hunter Lily
April 24th, 2011, 02:33 PM
thank you :) ^
I must say however, this is not my best work.
I wrote this just now while I was typing it into the post.
It took me, tops, 10 minutes. :D