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MadManWithaBox
April 18th, 2011, 03:50 PM
'Please don't do this' he said. His voice cracking with the weight of what she'd just said.
'I'm sorry' she said. 'I wish it hadn't ended like this. I really do'
'I love you so much' He said. He took a step towards her, but she took one back.
'I love you so much, I wake up in the morning and think about you, and I go to bed thinking of ways to make you happy the next time I see you'
'Don't make it any harder. Please' The strength she'd entered the room with had evaporated, and now she was silently crying,

'Give it one more chance' He dropped to his knee's, begging her to stay. 'I'l be who you want me to be. I can make you happy again. Just don't leave me'

'I'm so sorry. The words spilled out of her mouth, along with the sobs that kept her heart racing. 'But I just don't love you anymore. I haven't loved you for a long time. I tried to love you, I truly did. But its just not there'

'Stay with me please I need you' the words came out, with no pause, little more than babble, his desperation clear on his face.

'Please I'l do anything I love you I love you I'l do anything to keep you'
She walked over to him, the tears still wet on her face. But her mind made up. She bent down to his broken, battered, self, and kissed him on the cheek. 'Goodbye' she said.

She opened the door. And left his life. He sat there on the floor, defeated and broken. He suddenly shouted, a pathetic, defiant, message, to the girl he loved.

'I DON'T NEED YOU. YOU HEAR ME? FUCK YOU. FUCK YOU. FUCK YOU FUCK YOU FUCK YOU FUCK YOU I'L BE BETTER OFF WITHOUT YOU'

But he knew that was a lie. He knew, she'd gone. She'd taken her heart, his heart. Her soul, his soul. Her mind,... now his mind was broken.

He loved her more than anything in the world. Now she'd gone. How would he survive?

The Madness.
April 18th, 2011, 04:47 PM
This was great. Brought a tear to my eye.

MadManWithaBox
April 18th, 2011, 04:49 PM
Thanks Lade.