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Roses_Are_Yellow
April 18th, 2011, 12:48 AM
Roses are red
Violets are blue
who hates their school
gosh, I know I do

2nd Poem

Her once glowing brown eyes
stare back at her, lifeless
as she stares in the mirror
trying to find her self

She sees a different girl
Not the one that had the grades
or the ambition
She saw a girl with a look of devastation

What happened?
how did this once carefree girl
who loved school
now acted like a fool

How she hated to let people down
So she worked to make them happy
She got tired
so she gave ip and retired

How she loved to hang out with friends
spend every moment with them
now she gets annoyed
and makes up lies so she can avoid

Who's the girl in the mirror
The one she doesn't know
this girl is unfamiliar
the one she can't stand so