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Old March 20th, 2017, 03:42 AM   #1
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Default First Writing Attempt: Wattpad Short Story

Hey fam,

If anyone's wanting something quick to read and feel like giving me any feedback on a short story that I wrote, that'd be awesome.
It's published on Wattpad, the link is below:

https://www.wattpad.com/story/103153...=share_myworks

It's called 'These Violent Delights' and it's inspired by Shakespeare's play 'Romeo and Juliet'. The themes are rather mature and macabre, so just take care if you're reading it that it doesn't act as a trigger.

Thanks for anyone who's reading this I really appreciate it, and if you read my short story... I hope you like it!!!
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Link doesn't work for me so I couldn't see it man
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