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Old January 16th, 2012, 09:40 AM   #21
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Nice! Not sure if you can on GT....but turning the steering so you can see the face of the wheel always makes a car shot look better. Left turn in your case.


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Old January 16th, 2012, 10:33 AM   #22
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Nice! Not sure if you can on GT....but turning the steering so you can see the face of the wheel always makes a car shot look better. Left turn in your case.

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Old January 17th, 2012, 10:33 PM   #23
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No photo to critique, so I'll restart it.


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Old January 17th, 2012, 11:12 PM   #24
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Nice use of rule-of-thirds, interesting color and contrast between the bright building and dreary sky, nice focus. Like it. :]

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Old January 17th, 2012, 11:22 PM   #25
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My profile picture is my picture.

Above me? interesting picture. fedora and necklaces are cool. Whatever that face is adds humor. 8.5/10

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Old January 18th, 2012, 10:27 PM   #26
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Old January 18th, 2012, 10:32 PM   #27
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Oh dang that's cool. My one and only complaint is the lack of a stem. It would'a looked like a little tuff of hair :3


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Old January 18th, 2012, 10:44 PM   #28
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Thanks, I think I agree, but that was the only apple we had. ;]

I really like the perspective, colors, and group of four flowers there in the middle. I think the one on the bottom left is a little distracting, though...

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Old January 18th, 2012, 10:51 PM   #29
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Wow. that's incredible. it has a very dreamy, ethereal feel. I was thinking of saying that it might be better if a part of it was a little more in focus, but no. It looks so beautifully surreal the way you did it. The colors are amazing and there's no noise in the background, which really enhances the photo. Really, truly beautiful. Great job!

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Old January 18th, 2012, 11:17 PM   #30
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Thank you!

I really love your macro- the colors, the focus... all great! I think that just maybe it would be more pleasing to the eye if the droplet was more to the left because that's just where your eye usually drifts first, but then again, if you did that, you'd loose the tiny little droplet all the way to the left, which I think adds a nice touch...

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Old January 25th, 2012, 12:24 PM   #31
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I love the focus of this image and the composition. The focus at the bottom however does not blend in as well as it could I my opinion. But I do really like the image over all.



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Old January 25th, 2012, 09:47 PM   #32
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I love the colors; they're incredibly vibrant and really pop out nicely. That's a great spot for photography you can create some very powerful photos. My criticism lies in the fact that there's no real focus. My eye doesn't know where to rest, what to look at. If you payed more attention to one spot while the colors of the rest of the scene meshed together, the scene would be more powerful. Perhaps even bring a model to pose there, and have this incredible scene in the background.

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Old January 25th, 2012, 10:32 PM   #33
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I love the colors; they're incredibly vibrant and really pop out nicely. That's a great spot for photography you can create some very powerful photos. My criticism lies in the fact that there's no real focus. My eye doesn't know where to rest, what to look at. If you payed more attention to one spot while the colors of the rest of the scene meshed together, the scene would be more powerful. Perhaps even bring a model to pose there, and have this incredible scene in the background.

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Only thing I'd have to say is I think I'd personally like it a tiny bit brighter. :]

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Old January 26th, 2012, 11:40 AM   #34
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Beautiful!
Only thing I'd have to say is I think I'd personally like it a tiny bit brighter. :]

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Love this, the composition and the focus are just great! I don't think there are any bad points for this at all


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Old January 26th, 2012, 10:08 PM   #35
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Love this, the composition and the focus are just great! I don't think there are any bad points for this at all

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Old January 27th, 2012, 12:24 PM   #36
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^ Thank you

I like the photo, it could be better. I think what you could have done to improve it was to make the focus sharper and also the bird at the edge that has been cut in half, either have got it all in or none of it. It would make it a lot stronger.


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Old January 27th, 2012, 01:46 PM   #37
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I like the feel you get off the photo-this old gothic tone. The black and white, bare trees, clouds, and tower-like structures to the right really help get that across. My criticism is that I don't quite get the message of this photo. It would have been better if you took the photo from a different angle-perhaps a close-up of the trees with the outline of the structures in the background or the opposite. Also the the right corner, there's what I assume is a glare, which can work well in some photos, but here it feels messy. It makes the tower structure blurry and takes away from the overall quality. Basically taking the photo from a different angle would rectify all this, but great job bringing across the tone .

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I like the power that the center of the flower has (Sharpness)
The fact that it's just the flower in the photo makes it look as beautiful as it can be seen (in general).
I also like the blurriness of the petals in the ''background''.
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I like the photo, it could be better. I think what you could have done to improve it was to make the focus sharper and also the bird at the edge that has been cut in half, either have got it all in or none of it. It would make it a lot stronger.

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You forgot to put a photo in your post so I'm restarting it...
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