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Old January 8th, 2012, 02:22 AM   #1
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Old January 8th, 2012, 11:06 AM   #2
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I think this is a great idea .

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I love love love the perspective. It's so fluid and beautiful; it fascinates me. I really enjoy the concept of it-very powerful. I like that the colors are grey but the lighting is so perfect that it doesn't feel bland. It also has a kind of rhythm in the pattern that's really enticing. The only minor criticism I have is that, while the perspective is really great, I think if your camera was lower, and you got a personal shot of a few chairs and from there the eye moved to the thousands lying beyond, it would add more depth to the photo. Other than that though, really great job .


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Old January 8th, 2012, 11:52 AM   #3
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Old January 8th, 2012, 01:02 PM   #4
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I like it though I would like to see a bit more of the flappy thingy. Like twist it a little to the left.

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Old January 8th, 2012, 04:31 PM   #5
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That landscape is gorgeous, I question where it's at! With the lamp post, if it was a bit darker, it would add an air of mystery to it!
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Old January 8th, 2012, 04:43 PM   #6
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This is opinion, but I don't care for the cut branches (or are those just dead?) Also, the bit of open on the box I think would look better closed more.

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That landscape is gorgeous, I question where it's at! With the lamp post, if it was a bit darker, it would add an air of mystery to it!
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Old January 8th, 2012, 06:34 PM   #7
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Old January 8th, 2012, 08:02 PM   #8
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That's cool! Id really love it if there was some action in the background
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Old January 8th, 2012, 08:19 PM   #9
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That's cool! Id really love it if there was some action in the background
Adorable fox in a great pose! It would be perfect if the picture was larger (I'm assuming it was taken on a phone?) and the fox was pulled up closer.

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Old January 8th, 2012, 08:37 PM   #10
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I like how the flowers to the left aren't focused in, it added a lot more to the picture. This ones from my phone to.
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Old January 8th, 2012, 08:43 PM   #11
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I like how the flowers to the left aren't focused in, it added a lot more to the picture. This ones from my phone to.
Love the colors and the contrast between the sky and trees/deck. the only thing I think would make it better is if it were not taken on a phone.

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Old January 9th, 2012, 01:26 AM   #12
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Love the colors and the contrast between the sky and trees/deck. the only thing I think would make it better is if it were not taken on a phone.

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the photo is well taken-the blurryness of the objects in the mirror are contrasted nicely with the sharp clarity of the outline of the mirror. I like the beautiful simplicity of it. But I think that, while this photo is well constructed, it's missing a depth, or story. There's nothing in the mirrored image that's especially powerful. For example if there was a person there, or a heart or something, with that 'caption' that objects are closer than they appear, it gives a very powerful message.

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Old January 9th, 2012, 01:30 AM   #13
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It has a nice clarity I have a hard time achieving. The black corner is distracting though it indicated the angle and sculpture of the face. The angle was nice and intentional or not the glare on the eye was nice. The blur of the eyelashes contrast nicely though the green hue is somewhat distracting. All in all a lovely photo.

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Old January 9th, 2012, 01:40 AM   #14
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It has a nice clarity I have a hard time achieving. The black corner is distracting though it indicated the angle and sculpture of the face. The angle was nice and intentional or not the glare on the eye was nice. The blur of the eyelashes contrast nicely though the green hue is somewhat distracting. All in all a lovely photo.

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I really like the focus-I don't know if it was intentional or not, but I like that the ladybug isn't centered, that's it's part of the scene and not the whole photo. I also like the lighting a lot-it's very soft and sweet. That being said, it might be better to get it closer up, by cropping out the top, which seems unnecessary as it adds nothing to the photo. Also, the color of the ladybug is really pretty, but consider using an editing program (it doesn't need to be photoshop-windows photo gallery is more than enough for the basics) to brighten up colors and increase contrast. If you are good at using photoshop or whatever, try playing with the photo to exercise your skills and creativity-for example imagine the photo was black and white besides for a beautiful, vibrant red ladybug.

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Old January 9th, 2012, 01:50 AM   #15
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I really like the focus-I don't know if it was intentional or not, but I like that the ladybug isn't centered, that's it's part of the scene and not the whole photo. I also like the lighting a lot-it's very soft and sweet. That being said, it might be better to get it closer up, by cropping out the top, which seems unnecessary as it adds nothing to the photo. Also, the color of the ladybug is really pretty, but consider using an editing program (it doesn't need to be photoshop-windows photo gallery is more than enough for the basics) to brighten up colors and increase contrast. If you are good at using photoshop or whatever, try playing with the photo to exercise your skills and creativity-for example imagine the photo was black and white besides for a beautiful, vibrant red ladybug.

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The green of the tree and the red on the ground contrast nicely, accentuating the more faded blue colors (such as in the fur and on the tree trunk. Personally I would like to see the rest of the tail, for a more complete feel to the photograph. It wold also help add to the size of the photo.
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Yeah, my typical style is focusing things to the corner with a nice background, that was intentional. I used a magnifying glass and still couldn't get too close up. It took a long time to get it on my side of the grass so I took the first good one after an hour give or take. I personally, as ridiculous as this is, like to accentuate the realism of a photo. Other than correcting lighting I like to keep the natural feel of a photograph-- especially a nature one.


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Old January 15th, 2012, 12:34 PM   #16
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^I like it, it's a nice perspective. Thumbs up.

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Old January 15th, 2012, 02:12 PM   #17
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I like how (you? Movement media?) captured the splash. The angle would have been better at a higher angle in my opinion because that feels like a commercial. The person in the background might have looked better if more heavily blurred.


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Old January 15th, 2012, 10:27 PM   #18
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I think your photo is too far in, or too far out. The corners of the rims, the white, it is cut off. It needs to stay or go... other than that I don't see anything wrong with it

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I really like how you made it look like you're looking out of the trees. Only criticism is that I think the flare is kinda distracting and bright.


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Old January 16th, 2012, 07:57 AM   #19
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It's a good idea for a photographer (creative)
the photos colours aren't wrong-'cause you wrote something about crappy lens.. (that much). The blur seems artistic!
I don't like the crowd from behind,if you had taken only a bit more of the stage and him it would be better!
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Old January 16th, 2012, 08:05 AM   #20
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Love the perspective and lighting.
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