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Old April 26th, 2018, 07:39 PM   #1
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Default The Mystery Girl-A Casualty Fanfiction

I have started writing a story about Casualty, and would very much appreciate it if you guys could read it. I need some suggestions for what happens next. I don't mind if you haven't seen the show, as I can work around that. Any suggestions are appreciated.

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Old April 26th, 2018, 07:55 PM   #2
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I like it so far! It even got my heart beating when they found her and you described her injuries (which is weird, because I didn't expect to get so hooked to the story even though it's so short). I think that maybe they should bring her to the Hospital, and then there's a whole mystery about who she is. Maybe she tells the nurses some things that she remembers, and then they get a message from the Child Protective Services or something saying that they are going to push her into a foster home if the doctors don't find her relatives. This causes the doctors to go into a panic, and they have a limited amount of time to find the family and preserve the memories that she told them all about.

Anyways, the story is great so far despite it being so short. I look forward to reading more!

EDIT: I didn't specify who "them" was at all! I fixed it, though.

Hey! What's up? I'm IcyCool and I'm 14. I'm from Ontario, Canada, and I'm starting 9th grade in September!

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Old April 26th, 2018, 08:06 PM   #3
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I like it so far! It even got my heart beating when they found her and you described her injuries (which is weird, because I didn't expect to get so hooked to the story even though it's so short). I think that maybe they should bring her to the Hospital, and then there's a whole mystery about who she is. Maybe she tells the nurses some things that she remembers, and then they get a message from the Child Protective Services or something saying that they are going to push her into a foster home if they don't find her relatives. This causes them to go into a panic, and they have a limited amount of time to find the family and preserve the memories that she told them all about.

Anyways, the story is great so far despite it being so short. I look forward to reading more!
Ooh, that seems interesting! I'll keep this in mind. Thanks!
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Old April 27th, 2018, 02:51 PM   #4
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Chapter 2 is up!
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Old April 30th, 2018, 06:26 PM   #5
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Chapter 4 is up! Please leave comments and kudos! If you have suggestions, please leave them as well! Every one helps!

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Old May 7th, 2018, 07:41 PM   #7
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I just finished chaper 5. I need more suggestions and feedback, so please leave comments. I would really appreciate it. That way I could make the story even better and more interesting to you. Thanks!
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Old May 8th, 2018, 05:55 PM   #8
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Please send comments and suggestions! I may do a give away for a short story about whatever you want! Only people who leave comments will be entered.
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Old May 18th, 2018, 07:43 PM   #9
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Old May 20th, 2018, 08:31 AM   #10
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Contest info is up on my bio!
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Old May 21st, 2018, 05:59 PM   #11
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A guest just left kudos on this work.

If you leave a kudos without an AO3 account, I won't know who it is.
Make an account if you want to leave a kudos for the contest.
Otherwise, comment saying who you are or leave a visitor message here.
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Old May 24th, 2018, 07:10 PM   #12
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Chapter 8 is up!

Remember to enter the contest! Infomis on my profile on AO3!
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Contest has ended. Due to nobody confirming if they entered or not, only a couple people were entered, so nobody has won. I'll try another contest maybe in November.
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