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Old July 22nd, 2010, 09:31 AM   #1
Cosmic
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Name: Declan
Join Date: March 10, 2010
Location: England
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My first piece in a while - hope you enjoy it! Please do reply with any ideas, thoughts, interpretations or criticisms. Also, any ideas for a title are welcome.

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Your ever expanding exclusion zone,
Was it just your love that had me on loan?
Your callous, cutting, cryptic drones,
I hurled myself through sticks and stones.

But as I emerge from the fray,
As I stand here, at the end of the day,
I reconcile the trespasses you sort to allow,
I stand here and wonder where you are now.

I clasp onto forgiveness,
Hope under one foot.
Waging war with your cruelty,
The life you seek to uproot.

Back into the fray,
I charge in deep.
I will wait for no man;
Love is not here to keep.

If you feel that way about me... why don't you try and act nicely?
You never know what you might see, when you try, and try, and try...

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