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Old July 19th, 2017, 01:19 PM   #1
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Default How do you think of my animation I made?

I don't like the fact that the forum system does not work with HTML Iframe tag, but I posted it on YouTube here. How do you think of it? Can you give me some feedback?

Also, sorry if this is in the wrong topic.
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Old July 21st, 2017, 03:33 PM   #2
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I think it's cool! I think it would be a little better if it went a bit faster and the vid was a a little shorter.

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Old July 28th, 2017, 12:12 AM   #3
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Ya, I like it. It has strong potential. I would suggest possibly getting a tripod or just balancing the camera on so that it isn't so bouncy. A little shorter would be nice as well ~5 mins instead of 10.
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Old October 17th, 2017, 07:45 PM   #4
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Ya, I like it. It has strong potential. I would suggest possibly getting a tripod or just balancing the camera on so that it isn't so bouncy. A little shorter would be nice as well ~5 mins instead of 10.
Thanks. I lost my phone camera stand, so I used a selfie stick connected to a regular camera stand. The selfie stick was a really cheap and not rigid one that was a bit bendy.
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Old November 24th, 2017, 01:09 PM   #5
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Besides of the wiggling camera a nice film.
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Old December 5th, 2017, 09:58 PM   #6
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Besides of the wiggling camera a nice film.
I couldn't find a camera stand. I tried stacking some boxes and using that as a stand, but it kept falling. So I just used a selfie stick. LOL.

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Your voice works well it has a combo of European American. I think once you fine tune it and work on the details you should consider perhaps working towards making it into an escape the room/murder mystery or other puzzle type storylines. Then you can add sound effects and stuff too. But it's a good start man
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