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Old July 6th, 2006, 09:54 PM  
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Join Date: January 15, 2006
Default Re: Cat's in the Cradle: Chapter One - 1990

Wow I love it so far. I like how it's in first person. You started off the plot well. There's one thing. We don't know what the characters look like. Stories, like movies, play out in my mind. Right now these characters have no faces (so to speak).

Overall I like the story so far. Continue when you can.
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