Re: Another Poem from Me to You
thinks for the corrections, I usually don't make those kind of mistakes, but I don't have a spell cheaker anymore *sobs*
but as for the type of poem, this is one of 10 in a story like *anti beer* set.
There not ment to be metaphorical.
there ment to be pretty stright forward.
but yeah, I have to agreee, I like metaphroical poems and stories better.
and thats usually my fancy in poems.
""The New Law of Righteousness," that there "shall be no buying or selling, no fairs nor markets, but the whole earth shall be a common treasury for every man," and "there shall be none Lord over others, but every one shall be a Lord of himself.""