Re: Another Poem from Me to You
Interesting... you need to show the reader more though and not 'tell' as much. It would of been better if it were more metaphorical I think.
Also, grammatical errors: "Senicle", were you trying to write 'Cynical'? And "disdane" is 'Disdain'.
Anyway, keep up the good work, Kolte!
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