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Old May 7th, 2006, 05:27 AM  
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Sometimes writers arrange words in order to add a sertine 'feel' to their work. I would make a few changes to where you deside to make another line.
I liked it. Does this symbolize something in your life lost_in_fear? Also, Welcome to VT!
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