Thread: The Lightning
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Old April 9th, 2006, 07:36 PM  
Join Date: November 19, 2005
Location: Canada
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Default The Lightning

The lightning strikes me
Over and over again.
Tremendous pain, like a thousand thorns.
Permanent scars surround my body,
When will the misery stop?
I start to feel nauseous, weak.
I open my eyes, everything is a blur,
I look at my hands, they are covered in blood.
Suddenly I lose all sense of feeling, and I releax.
For a moment I am relieved...It's over,
but then I feel an overwelming shock go through me.
I close my eyes, and I lay there...dead.

(Just a quick poem I whipped up a few minutes ago for Religion class. My parents like it, what do you guys think? And I know I say "I" too much in it)
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