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Old February 25th, 2006, 01:43 PM  
Lost_and_fallen
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Your writing's come on a long way since I last saw anything you wrote.
I like this, it's good - It's well structured and I like the way you've put alot of the things you want to say.

I particularly liked "but you're loving but leaving,
loving but leaving,
am i something that you're missing?
"take it or leave it" were the words
you chose over mine remember
10.01 the night has been and gone
our memories will dissapear"

It'd be good to see more from you soon

xx

*...All the possibility and promise just weighs on me so heavily...*
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