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Old October 5th, 2005, 09:28 PM  
Hi i am jon
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Join Date: October 3, 2005
Location: Illinois
Age: 24
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ok ill be honest i thoght it wasnt great, untill the end "i call you dad" that is an amazing ending, maybe you can work with it, keep it up though

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