That's better then anything I will ever write. Wow. That was amazing... I'll be as good as you one day. I hope. English is about all I'm good at.
But yeah, when I was reading that it compled me, it made me want to keep on reading it, it was as if I were there watching this unfold. As I said before, this is simply an amazing piece of work. Better then most of the illegable crap that teenagers post on teh interweb that's for sure.