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Old October 13th, 2004, 10:40 PM  
cybertribes
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This poem is really good, and it has the potential to be great. Writing a poem is just the beginning, true poetry demands vision & then painstaking revision.

Don\'t gamble your future on the present
which rapidly fades into the past.
Remember life is fleeting.
It wasn\'t meant to last.
Know where it is that you\'re going
and get there fast.
Because only the All-Knowing Knows
which day will be your last.

Jim Cady.
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