August 6th, 2012, 01:48 AM
Join Date: August 6, 2012
Location: kanata, ottawa, ontario, canada
Originally Posted by Blackness_chic
I lay there sobbing and shaking,
Hopefully someone is waking,
Do they hear me cry and scream?
Or do they think it's just a dream?
I need someone to hear,
Cuz this guy is to near,
Then he climed into bed,
the fears were running through my head,
As he got on top,
I yelled at him to STOP,
I tried to get away,
He pinned me down and made me stay,
As i felt him force it in,
I knew there was no chance for me to win,
As I felt the pain down there,
I knew from then he didn't care,
He finished what he started,
our bodies then become departed,
For i wished it was only a dream
Because i was only 16.
Wow sweetie what a beautiful poem, but it needs some touch ups, are you planning on making it a song?