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Old August 12th, 2007, 05:27 PM  
rEpReSsIoN.?
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Default Re: Poem called 'Small Chav' tell me if it good or not

I'm using some different techniques i have done poem analyzation before and many poets use it (as in incorrectly spelt words to get across their point).

Another point about dylexia... i don't see why i should edit my unformal work if they can we read easily without difficult (formal i mean essays, poems etc, this poem being a exception as i have already stated above). And i have had help with dyslexia and I have dratically improved. Like i always used to spell check every comment into vt but now i can't b bothered as people know what i am saying.

I wanna be there when you call
I wanna catch you when you fall
I wanna be the one you need
I wanna be the one you breathe
Today’s the day we’ll fade away

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