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Old August 4th, 2007, 04:57 PM  
Zazu
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Name: David
Join Date: April 4, 2006
Location: East of England, UK
Age: 25
Gender: Male
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Default Re: Poem called 'Small Chav' tell me if it good or not

I personally like it, being a brit myself I know of the recent problems with chav / gang culture and I feel it does't reflect recent events well, but I think the ending is a bit too abrubt for my liking, try extending the last stanza to 4 line instead of just 2.

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