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Old August 2nd, 2007, 07:08 PM  
rEpReSsIoN.?
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Default Re: Poem called 'Small Chav' tell me if it good or not

yay!!! feedback thank you for your comment
the poem isn't that good i know but its art everyone has their own opinions on art
the point of the poem if that i'm using a sterotypical chav words like 'hoe' and 'crib' and of course 'init'

I wanna be there when you call
I wanna catch you when you fall
I wanna be the one you need
I wanna be the one you breathe
Today’s the day we’ll fade away

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orochimaru hehehe
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