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Old July 17th, 2007, 02:38 AM  
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Default The Gates Of Hell

this is a poem i wrote about a year ago...

Like a demon dragging me down, deeper into the depths of hell
You awaken the evil spirits that wreak havoc on my soul.
My head explodes with the excruciating pain that fills my mind.
I cannot see clearly, the burden is hauling me down.
I am hurtling towards the fiery chasm that burns my very essence.
The scorching pit swallows every fibre of my being.
The silky flames lick at my ankles.
I can no longer feel the pain,
Only Freedom.

what do you think?

"I wish i had a reason, my flaws are open season, for this i gave up trying, one good turn deserves my dying"
Bother - Stone Sour
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