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Old July 9th, 2007, 11:25 PM  
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Name: Valerie
Join Date: June 12, 2007
Location: PA
Age: 25
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Default Re: My Uncle, Johnny. A True Story.

I did like it My only suggestion: Since it is a poem, you should split it into lines & stanzas- well, lines anyway at least. Other than that, I enjoyed it- very inspirational
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