Originally Posted by JacksonMyChemiclRomance
Ok please don't pick up on how it's written I type differnetly from most other people on this site. I try to make sense to u but it is like speaking another language. So please don't spam.
Sorrry Jackson, but it's not different,
it's simply incorrect.
lack the knowledge to spell some very simple words ('dazzling'
), you're missing out on a lot of very, very
basic punctuation, and your story has no formattting at all. I doubt you even planned it out, I can just tell by the big jumble of text that has about 7-8 different subjects in it. No offense, but I think you're just writing this off the top of your head.
Also, I am not spamming.
I'm sorry if what you came here for is some one to sympathize with you on the story subject, but that's too bad, I've come here to criticize your writing, which is partly what the forum was made for.
Have a great
day! : )
Edit: Olivia, what the hell are you going on about? I honestly can't understand anything you say.