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Old July 8th, 2007, 11:42 AM  
Name: Jackson
Join Date: June 11, 2007
Location: Carluke, Scotland
Gender: Male
Default Re: Wakening Up To Find A Unwanted Feeling .:Part I:.

Originally Posted by Fallstel View Post
I highly reccomend you read my writing guide, I'll tell you that. Your sentences run on quite a bit and you're lacking some very basic punctuation.

Well I know it's not very well written but it's more about the story rather than the punctuation. I don't have all day to write it.
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