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Old July 7th, 2007, 04:17 PM  
Name: Sage
Join Date: April 21, 2007
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Blog Entries: 10
Default Re: Wakening Up To Find A Unwanted Feeling .:Part I:.

I highly reccomend you read my writing guide, I'll tell you that. Your sentences run on quite a bit and you're lacking some very basic punctuation.
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