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Old June 29th, 2007, 09:18 PM  
ThatCanadianGuy
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Default Re: Random story

Sounds good. Ya got great vocabulary, but like Tim said, you MUST use proper paragraphs (indenting and whatnot)! However, based on the prologue, it's not very original. Interesting, but not engaging for very long. HOWEVER, I am just basing this on the prologue. Of course I have no idea what your story is actually about! GOOD LUCK!!!
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