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Old June 13th, 2007, 11:02 PM  
Sage
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Name: Sage
Join Date: April 21, 2007
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Default Re: Random story

I've mixed feelings about this.

Good: Finally! A story that isn't about angsty teen experiences and all that whiney bull. It's a nice break. Your vobabulary is also pretty good, along with dialouge.

Not so Good: Someone needs some FORMATTING! You should always start a paragraph by indenting, and since a lot of format features aren't on most forums, you'd be better off writing it as a word doc in a processor and just putting it up for download. You might also want to read my stickied tutorial in this forum. : )

Best of luck.
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