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Old April 5th, 2005, 11:50 PM  
silentfantasy
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Join Date: April 5, 2005
Location: chicago
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BROKEN

she ran until her legs ached
to where she couldnt run no more
to where her hair was wet from rain
her heart was just too sore
her entire body was drenched with sweat
but yet she still felt cold
she felt like she had nothing
but an empty soul
the darkness of the night
reflecting off the stars
it made life look so beautiful
but life was just too hard
she looked at the empty streets
where no one heard her cries
she had no hope or any faith
nothing but broken lies
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