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Old January 12th, 2007, 10:21 PM  
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Default Wanted to know what you thought...

I'm thinking of finishing or continuing this story, let me know if you think it is a good start. Thanks!

It all started on a cold Decmber morning. That was the day I met Lucy. December 1, 1941.

"Oop's pardon me," I said just as i would if I had bumped into any girl. My mother had tought me my manors well. "Oh, quite all right. Really it's my fault. I shouldn't have worn heels on a day like this. Indiana weather can be so harsh this time of year. I just slipped on this ice thats all." she responded with the voice of an angel, who's tones floated throurgh the air on that day like a eagle soars above the clouds. "Are you allright?" i asked. "Well, I may have wisted my ankle but i think i will be okay." "Let me buy you a cup of coffe, what do you say, Arnold's Dinner?"
I was one of Arnold's regular's. Everyday i came in after work, he was suprised to see me in so early on a Monday afternoon becuase nomally i run home first to feed my cat, but today i had a special friend with me. "Hey Tom, I wasn't expecting you to walk through that door so early!" Arnold, the classic dinner man, fat with a severly stained white apron bellowed out to me. "Well, I bumped into this lovely lady here and she twisted her ankle, what'd ya say bringin' us two cups of joe?" "I'll get Debbie right on it." "Thanks Arn!"
After bringing our coffe Debbie asked us if there was anything else she could do for us. after dissmissing her i said, "So, I never did catch your name."
"Lucy, Lucy Renyolds," said the beautiful blonde women sitting infront of me, "and you are?" "Tom, Tom Feilds, very nice to meet you."
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