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Old November 5th, 2006, 11:53 PM  
Makod
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Default Re: I wont take it anymore

It was great, except, the "FUCK YOU" and "LEAVE ME THE HELL ALONE" seem out of place. And, you capitalized just about all of your lines this time .

That didn't seem like rap either.

And so we ignore the beggar's cup
Praise your act in the Grand Finale
Teach the unborn the winners sign
a welcome grin to the world Royal
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