Thread: This Black Fog
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Old October 6th, 2006, 04:15 PM  
schrei jess
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Default This Black Fog

Everything is black
black and dying
Im a part of it
and that wont change
this black fog around my mind
it's here to stay, it wont let go

It's dragging me down
the fog ties me down
I cant leave, it wont let me leave
please just let me leave

I dont want to care anymore
I dont want to be anymore
I want to fade away
I want to waste away

You're dragging me down
making me feel guilty
just let me go
I need to go, I have to go
Why wont you let me go?


-So yeah, this poem is about depression (the black fog), and suicide, I figured that was pretty obvious but incase it wasnt, there you go Comments and critique appreciated!

I DO NOT GO ON HERE ANYMORE. I HAVE LEFT THIS PLACE FOR GOOD AND DON'T INTEND ON COMING BACK. PLEASE DON'T FRIEND REQUEST ME, PRIVATE MESSAGE ME, OR ANYTHING BECAUSE I WILL NEVER SEE IT AND YOU'LL NEVER GET A RESPONSE. THANK YOU.
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