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Old September 17th, 2006, 07:54 PM  
Join Date: September 10, 2006
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Spheres of vast ocean paralyzes emotion.
Blizzard and strive make everything right.
As granite hearts and artistic pose
dance along where isolation starts...
Vanity and sharp thinking steers toward terrific moral sinking.
I'll meet you across forgiveness sea, where the waves crash down
and break the living me.
Thrashing and crashing, screaming and tearing...
falling apart and nobody's hearing.
I feel as though Im near the end, struggling so hard..waiting to begin.

----ill edit this later...i can't think of how to wrap this deep emotion up.
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