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statue and sediment

Posted May 14th, 2012 at 07:39 PM by embers
Updated May 14th, 2012 at 07:43 PM by embers

she lives on the edge of a black hole
where time is a frozen statuette
(the type handed down through generations
to which is said: "hey!
look!
Time is stuck in a funny little pose.")

and with every rotation of the sun
her eyes will thaw, then her nose and then her face
(and with every rotation of the sun
i wash over the shores by her feet;
here she will caress me
and run me through her fingers.)

and with every rotation of the sun,
as my muscles tire and stitches begin to sweat,
she will say "will you rest?"
and i will smile "i am rested enough."
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  1. Old Comment
    I love you so much, you are amazing. <3
    Posted May 14th, 2012 at 08:36 PM by Angel Androgynous Angel Androgynous is offline
  2. Old Comment
    I love you so much too <3
    Posted May 14th, 2012 at 09:05 PM by embers embers is offline
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    Guiz, get a chatroom. You two are too cute for my eyes. Lovely poem, Sachal. Like I said, nice ending and love the rotations of the sun thing. Now, on to more pressing matters...

    Where the hell is my poem.
    Posted May 15th, 2012 at 04:46 AM by Amaryllis Amaryllis is offline
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    Thank you Z! Your poems will be delivered to you by stork shortly
    Posted May 15th, 2012 at 11:49 AM by embers embers is offline
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    pretty amazing
    Posted May 17th, 2012 at 10:43 AM by Breakeven Breakeven is offline
 

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