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AutumnDae
June 6th, 2008, 05:38 PM
Don't cry pretty baby.
It's all over now.
He won't be bothering you anymore.
I'm here to protect you.

Don't worry pretty baby.
He can't hurt you anymore.
I'll stay with you until you're okay.
I'll shield you from the pain.

Don't scream pretty baby.
It was all just a dream.
He was inside your head.
I want to save you.

Don't cry pretty baby.
I chased the monsters away.

kerry
July 8th, 2008, 01:09 PM
thats is very good
:P

Otaku Geek
July 8th, 2008, 05:22 PM
I liked it :D

monde
July 19th, 2008, 01:50 PM
Oh, it's really good. It would be turned into a song, it would sound awesome.

[crazy]girl
July 19th, 2008, 02:27 PM
Oh, it's really good. It would be turned into a song, it would sound awesome.

haah. a slightly harsh kids song :P

very nice though..i can't write much..and i can't ryhme to safe me life