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Mars
September 24th, 2015, 10:45 AM
I still need to make or find a beat to go with it, but here's what i wrote so far:

You know there's honesty then loyalty
They ain't different to me
Before honesty comes love
And before loyal ya free
So when you love someone a lot
Well be ready for the chains
Handcuffed like a criminal
With blood rushin through ya veins
And you hope that blood keeps rushing
With your heart still complete
Cuz you know it might be broken
And you soul will rest deceased
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And i'm gonna insert some rihanna sample for the hook
Gonna sound dope af tell me what you think so far

Plane And Simple
September 24th, 2015, 11:38 AM
The Open Book :arrow2: Other Works.

This is better suited here.

Mars
September 25th, 2015, 01:08 PM
Finished it up:

You know there's honesty then loyalty
They ain't different to me
Before honesty comes love
And before loyal ya free
So when you love someone a lot
Well be ready for the chains
Handcuffed like a criminal
blood rushing through ya veins
And you hope that blood keeps rushing
With your heart still complete
Cuz you know it might be broken
And your soul will rest deceased
And you might become a monster
With no emotion at all
You got them heartless scary eyes
And around ya heart's a wall
Constantly closed gate
Thats guarded by 50 Knights
Who are loyal to the king
And honest until they die
So you know that there's no difference
Because both of em's a lie
No person is always honest
Find out where their loyalties lie

Hook:
Cuz you know
Through my hard knock life time
I learnt that there was love
And through my hard knock life time
I learnt that first comes love
And through my hard knock life time
You can feel my truths
And through my hard knock life time
You can feel my truths

- played to the instrumental of D.O.A by Jay Z and it eventually fades out