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Doc. Maestro
June 26th, 2015, 11:02 AM
I thought you were my friend,
I believed it, every single lie,
But then when I needed you,
You ignored my desperate cries

You thought you got away,
You thought I did not see,
You thought I did not notice,
That you don't care for me,

But one thing that you forgot,
To discover is up to you,
Is that I knew you were pretending,
Because I'm a pretender too

pocketmouse
June 26th, 2015, 03:48 PM
did you write this?

Microcosm
June 26th, 2015, 04:07 PM
Very good :)

I love this tbh

Doc. Maestro
June 27th, 2015, 10:18 AM
did you write this?

Yes I did, I had to get something off my chest and it came out like this. It tends to happen like that :)

Very good :)

I love this tbh

Thank you :) It was something I had to get off my chest



Posts merged. Next time, please use the "Multi" quote button. -Alluring

Jaffe
June 27th, 2015, 10:33 AM
Veneficus de Sapiens
Awesome writing. It made me feel something. Not sure I can describe what, and that is a complement to you. I really liked it. (I admit, I've been to this thread to re-read it about 15 times before I could respond. Sorry.)

Doc. Maestro
June 28th, 2015, 12:22 AM
Veneficus de Sapiens
Awesome writing. It made me feel something. Not sure I can describe what, and that is a complement to you. I really liked it. (I admit, I've been to this thread to re-read it about 15 times before I could respond. Sorry.)

It's okay, but thank you :) It honestly means a lot to me

hazelteen
July 21st, 2015, 03:16 PM
I love this, keep writing poetry! It's a wonderful outlet to bottled emotion

SethfromMI
July 21st, 2015, 09:00 PM
glad you got it off your chest. as always, well done! :)

everlong
July 21st, 2015, 09:11 PM
That was great, I enjoyed it a lot. Thumbs up.

Kuroshiro
September 8th, 2015, 01:02 PM
Great poem *clap clap clap*