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IconoclasticHeretic
March 14th, 2015, 01:36 PM
I thought about putting this in the cutting and self harm subforum but I figured it would belong in here instead. So yeah, here's a poem:

his skin
charred
in little red circles
the older ones distorted white
from burning ends
of midnight cigarettes
that document the dark times
the cries for help
the advice not taken
lonely boy
now fulfilled
will always remember

Vermilion
March 14th, 2015, 02:30 PM
That's really good I'd love to hear more if you've got any

tasminsmith
March 14th, 2015, 02:31 PM
cool thts good :)

IconoclasticHeretic
March 16th, 2015, 02:50 PM
That's really good I'd love to hear more if you've got any

I've got it up the ass. This was just my most recent thing.
There is a prose thing I've been working on that's also in this forum called "Color Guard" if you want to check it out.