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rileyedens
February 25th, 2015, 03:55 PM
when I was with her, it was one of the few times I let myself feel. I wanted to feel her love, her sorrow, and everything in between. For even in her saddest moments, her galaxies brought me to a tranquil place, where the waves met the sun and believe me, I could stair at the color purple, forever.

this is really short but tell me what you think! :)

JamesSuperBoy
February 25th, 2015, 04:01 PM
A good short piece I imagine the horizon a sunset.

Vermilion
February 25th, 2015, 04:11 PM
That's great peace it's so easy to imagine and you can feel the emotions

Abhorrence
February 26th, 2015, 05:55 AM
Sounds cool, I like your use of words. That sounds so vague but oh well. :P

amgb
February 26th, 2015, 05:52 PM
Very nice~ You can feel the connection between these two lovers. Good job~