View Full Version : my first time

January 25th, 2015, 04:14 AM
https://farm8.staticflickr.com/7359/12024591625_6b0844eec2_b.jpg (https://flic.kr/p/jjzbag)IMG_4048 (https://flic.kr/p/jjzbag) by Sir.Penguin (https://www.flickr.com/people/[email protected]/), on Flickr
Your eyes blind themselves with their own water. Falling from them, are your emotions pouring out all on you like a waterfall. Time seems to slow down and you feel every painful second ticking past. You know step-by-step the destruction is unfolding right in front of you, but your body is too tired to do anything. Even though you can't hear anything and you don't see in color, you feel the blue emotions rise and vibrations of your sore vocal cords as you question yourself...why? Once the storm passes and all the water that could fall on top of you is used up, you are left damaged. The cool dark night is where you now live. Hiding the your pain from the world because it's too risky to trust.

i tried to write an emotional caption to go along with the picture i took

so..what do you think?

January 25th, 2015, 05:18 AM
This is a beautiful and very deep piece of writing Ricardo. It's amazing the message is so meaningful and if I could give you a rating I'd give a 10/10. You must love writing?:D

February 4th, 2015, 02:22 AM
Wow, you are really talented